What if Charlie and Renee Swan never got divorced? What if Bella was brought up in Forks as a Washington child? What if that impacted Bella's life majorly so that she was only loved by one guy? What if Bella was a target to different vampires, vampires that loved her in a different story? Interested in the sequel? Check it out here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/3710777-lust-a-short-story-sequel-to-midnight-a-twilight - "The dialogue seems realistic and brings your characters to life. Your writing style is unique, and I love your descriptions. I'll keep on reading! This is different than a lot of fanfictions I've read. Good job!" @Katiekatkitty "the way you tell the story is quite humorous....i don't really know how to describe it, but nevertheless, your writing makes me smile" @beeley3 "OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I love this story. I have been writing for a long time and I know a good story when I see one, its descriptive, its edge-of-your-seat kind of stuff. You definitely NEED to keep writing this story because, clearly everyone loves it and I think you have a creative mindand you could take Jacob Black and Bella Swan to a whole new level TEAM JACOB BLACK!!!!" @Unicornwolvespixie "u had me laughing the whole the time. I like ur sense of humor" @socceriana "More more more more!!!!" @inak14 "I give you a virtual: cookie hug teddy bear and trip to Disney world!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" @SarahTheBear03 "*raises eyebrows*" @MyNameIsFishStick "I just can't put this one down. Very good." @ShaelennDavis "OMMFG!!! It's midnight where I am and I have to bite my first to resist screaming but it hurts so much so I want to scream more but I can't or I will scream if hat makes any sense whatsoever!!!" @MoonBornFire "I....cant...stop....reading...." @MidnightMoonDusk "Wow! I don't really read these types of books but wow" @lillieserm12 "hahah. this chapter made me piss my pants XD" @Da_vamp "PLEASE UPLOAD SOON THIS STORY IS TOOO YUMMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) ;)" @EyeOfTheOwl
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