Red Eye. (DBS Films: Screenwriting Challenge #18.).
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Jasper - a troubled sixteen year old - is confronted by the actions and culprit of his past coming to light.
The questions lie in Beau, - a long known friend of the family - a Detective who will stop at nothing to find the truth and to extinguish the wildfire burning through the hallow of Jasper's soul.
Author's note!
Yellow Readers!
Justine here!
This scene is written in a screenwriting style. Which may answer some of the questionable choices format wise.
Many of the topics, contexts and sequences are inaccurate. As I am a lazy bag of potato chips that won't research what is necessary for my work.
The format of the script style may be inaccurate as well as I am an amateur in everything I do.
That being said.
Thanks for stopping by. 💙.
Warning! This story contains crime. Murder. Blood. Knives. Gore. Smoking. Burning of a house. Children being put in traumatic and/or difficult situations. And dark themes such as familial betrayal.
Reader discretion advised.
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