APARTEMEN 4 PINTU
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Di setiap keluarga, anak pertama harus jadi anak yang paling diandalkan, yang bisa melindungi adik-adiknya, yang bisa jadi pemimpin, yang kelak harus bisa menjadi wali dan wakil jika adik-adiknya terluka atau disakiti.
Tapi, anak pertama tidak bisa menjadi anak yang setangguh itu dengan sendirinya. Harus ada contoh dan pedoman dari orang terdekat. Dan biasanya, seorang Bapak lah yang mengajarkan hal tersebut.
"Tapi, gimana caranya gue belajar jadi anak yang tangguh dari seorang Bapak, kalau bokap gue aja nggak becus jadi seorang Bapak?"
Cerita ini adalah tentang kehidupan 4 saudara, tentang trauma bertahun-tahun, tentang kurangnya kasih sayang orangtua, dan tentang saling membagi cinta dalam persaudaraan.
Cerita ini hanyalah cerita fiksi.
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Blurb: Pooja My Life was simple. College, real-life friends, online friends, sports, other extra and co-curricular activities, a loving father and a scolding mother. Suddenly, one day, my life is flipped. There is a serial killer on my back, who has already killed my friend and a few other girls from my college. I can't let myself get killed. I need to escape...I have to survive. Cast: Sivaangi as Pooja Ashwin as Guru Get Ready to experience our Ashaangi in never-before-seen characters. Author's Note: The Evasion is a Psychological Thriller with a touch of romance. This is the original version of my book, which was drafted in May 2020 and published on 30 June 2020 under the same title on Amazon Kindle. Due to certain reasons, I scrapped the original version (removing the romantic part) and went with a different ending. The plot and the story are the same, just the storytelling and ending were different. While narrating the backstory of this book to a co-ashaangian, the idea of making the original version as an ashaangi fanfic popped into my mind. When I initially drafted this story last year, and when I read it with imaginary characters, it felt so normal. But after uploading it as a fanfic and reading it, imagining Ashaangi as the main lead, this book gave me a completely different vibe, and I was surprised by myself, how certain things synced in this story even before they met. Gemini AI generated the cover image, and the cover design (placement of title, series and author name) was done by me.
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