My Immortal (But Make it *Readable*)
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So... I basically rewrote My Immortal so the grammar and spelling (and word choice) could match up with the amazing plot.
So... I suggest you go read the original (or the one on Wattpad), but if you're struggling or whatever, you can come here... for help?
Idk, just read this if you want to read My Immortal, but like your brain cells (mostly).
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