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Continúa, Has publicado sep 08, 2023
This is kind of a what-if. Basically, it's a retelling of Dragon Ball Super. There is a lot of hate towards DBS, so I wanted to see if I could improve it! Please give me any feedback you have.

THE ORIGINAL STORY IS MADE BY AKIRA TORIYAMA AND OTHER ASSOCIATES. ALMOST ALL CHARACTERS IN THIS STORY ARE NOT MINE. I ACCEPT AND REALIZE THIS. ALL CREDIT FOR CHARACTERS AND PARTIAL CREDIT FOR STORY GOES TO THE CREATORS OF DRAGON BALL, DRAGON BALL Z, DRAGON BALL GT, AND DRAGON BALL SUPER. ANYONE IS ALLOWED TO RETELL OR READ THIS STORY WITH GIVEN CREDIT TO ME AND ALL OF THE ORIGINAL STORY'S OWNERS.
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Source: Dragon Ball Super (Manga) (Coloured) Credit: The man himself, Mr. Toyotarou Sensei This story is a retake, or revamped version (however you call it), from my last story called "What if Tanjiro was a Saiyan?" It will be more refined with added characters and a deeper storyline. WARNING: Uses of swearing (Mild & Heavy) and mention of violence will be displayed inside this story. I urge you not to read if you are easily triggered by any of these, so read at YOUR own discretion. There are some things that are changed within my story that will probably change the narrative. Story: Goku was found (before reaching the age of one) by the Kamado family exactly three years before Tanjiro's birth. The Saiyans inside this story have a similar backstory, except this time, they're almost wiped out by something other than an asteroid. These Saiyans are kind, or good (like the ones in DBS 'Universe 6 Saiyans'). Part of the story of Goku being sent to Earth will be put in the first chapter (*A/N*) while the entire story of Goku and of the Saiyans (involves both good and evil) will be put in another chapter that will be released sometime down the line. I'm open to all criticism. I need to focus on what I'm doing wrong and where I need to improve. Some changes might also take place after a chapter is published so be wary of that.