Dragon Ball Super: IMPROVED
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Last published Sat, Sep 30, 2023
This is kind of a what-if. Basically, it's a retelling of Dragon Ball Super. There is a lot of hate towards DBS, so I wanted to see if I could improve it! Please give me any feedback you have.
THE ORIGINAL STORY IS MADE BY AKIRA TORIYAMA AND OTHER ASSOCIATES. ALMOST ALL CHARACTERS IN THIS STORY ARE NOT MINE. I ACCEPT AND REALIZE THIS. ALL CREDIT FOR CHARACTERS AND PARTIAL CREDIT FOR STORY GOES TO THE CREATORS OF DRAGON BALL, DRAGON BALL Z, DRAGON BALL GT, AND DRAGON BALL SUPER. ANYONE IS ALLOWED TO RETELL OR READ THIS STORY WITH GIVEN CREDIT TO ME AND ALL OF THE ORIGINAL STORY'S OWNERS.
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