Becoming

I've written about my character Miss Butterfly in the James and the Giant Peach story in the past, but I decided to rewrite it. I'm working hard to improve on my writing and to show Butterfly's character development better.

After escaping from Spiker and Sponge, Miss Butterfly embarks on the most magical journey of her life that includes a young boy, six other bugs and a giant peach.

I would love to have feedback on this so feel free to comment! Thank you and enjoy. And a thank you to Demonwolf from Fanfiction.net for helping me out with this.

Miss Butterfly (c) me
James and the Giant Peach (c) Roald Dalh, Disney, Henry Selick