Twisted games

A 17 year old boy named Camilo living with his foster parents loves to go on adventures and learn about phycology. His world is nothing but technology, rumors have it that the people living there haven't seen a true night sky in more then 20 years. There's a wall separating the real world to the tech world. no one dares go as getting caught would lead to major consequences maybe even death. But what Camilo finds seems to be something nobody would have suspected. Was he doing the right choice possibly risking his life to go out to the real world?
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I want this to hopefully turn out being something in the far future although if it ends up being nothing I wouldn't be that upset either way. I hope the day people read or see this they feel as if they were reading an actual book and maybe get attached to the characters as that is what I am aiming for. At the time of writing this story I am in high school wanting to be an animator afterwards and maybe make my own cartoon show or somehow find a way to try and make this little silly world I have in mind into a book. There will be many mistakes maybe and throughout time I will do my best to fix them but hey would be nice to see how things change with time as well no? anyway to anyone who has made it this far into reading my babbling hope you like the story i've had in mind. :)