Taken -On Hold-
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Last published Thu, Nov 17, 2016
While Derek Morgan was visiting his family in Chicago, he reseived a phone call. Answering, he heard a sinister voice speak on the other line saying:
"A woman's scream grabs people's attention. Her cries draws in the hero's to her rescue. But it's her pleas for Mercy. The terror in her voice, the tears in her eyes. They draw in people like me".
At that, Morgan heard it. Her cries. His heart dropped as he recognized her voice. Gripping his phone tight to his ear, his hand shook.
Penelope.
The Team meets back at the BAU where they find something as equally sinister. The girls. JJ, Emily Prentiss and Penelope Garcia were all missing. and the only evidence they got were the phone calls that they each had received.
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