Death Wish

I see a tan hand come down over my keys. I jump up and look over my car, just in time to have my breath stolen away from me. Literally. Gasping and clawing the air, I fall to my knees.

My head started feeling light, blackness was crawling towards me mixed with flashes of my life: When I first held my baby brother, my best friend Alice and I at prom, my graduation and my mothers warm hug of congrats, my first day teaching, the happiness I felt at achieving my dream. They all came to me in a jumble.

Then I saw a pair of beautiful green eyes in front of me, and I hear a jingle.
I look down a suit covered arm and see something shiny in the hand. My keys. My eyes travel back up and see a handsome face, I liked the way his black hair curled softly and framed his face. Kind of like Ian Somerhalder's hair but curly. When my eyes meet his again there's a look of sorrow, as if he has been hurt all his life. I felt sorry for him. I tried to mumble, "Help me!" but I couldn't speak.
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