Rape Baby: The struggles of a Mexican American teenage girl

This is the prologue to the book I am starting to write. This will be my first book and its kind of a biography of me when I was in high school. The struggles I went through dealing with how I was conceived. When I'm done I will have talked about my freshmen year all the way until the middle of what should have been my Freshmen year of college when I was taking a break from school. I want your guys' opinion on what I wrote so far... soooooo COMMENT COMMENT COMMENT! maybe even rate it give me your honest opinion.