RWBY: A Knights Will (old)

Story description: A fight between three people so intense that in the eyes of the average commoner it felt like the gods were angry. That is where our main character fell. After sacrificing himself to save the people he loves, He falls to the ground with no hope of recovery. The most powerful knight of his generation is dead.

This is an old version and I'm rewriting this because this version had no direction and only an idea to go off of. There was no storyboard and I was making it up as I went along.

That and also my skill as a writer has changed.

This was too background information heavy and is one of the things that needed to change with the rewrite. no one wants to read a data book to understand the first chapter.

I have more chapters but I'll only have the prologue up to see if people like the idea for my character.

I'll post the rest if this gets more attention or something.

Also this was written on my phone