My brothers bestfriend

This is a story I got the idea of after reading 10+ storys of and watching Instagram reels, this is also my first story so there will be writer blocks, grammar mistakes, and more. I want feed back though guys, and I want to know what I need help with so make sure to tell me in the comment sections ☺️👍🏽

There might me some adult scenes and profanity usage and violent themes so if you're not okay with those I will put warnings before hand.

There's Laila & I'oane (E-oh-on-ay) McGregor: the twin brother and sister. They both love each other but want to strangle each other at the same times.

Andrea Rodriguez: Laila's best best friend and I'oane's girlfriend (Emiliano's cousin). She's the bestest friend you could have and she's a great hype woman.

Emiliano Romano: I'oanes bestfriend
(Andreas cousin). He seems like he's a grump but that's only when Laila's mad at him because he's whipped.

Emily & Akamu McGregor: Laila and I'oane parents
Both the McGregors and Romanos are rooting for Laila and Emiliano to get together but they don't say anything to obvious.

Isabella & Ezra Romano: Emiliano's parents
No matter how scary of a power couple they may look like they're the nicest people you could ever know.

Rachel & Grayson Caldwell: Emiliano's skanky fan girl & Laila's Ex-Boyfriend (they're siblings obviously). Yeah I'm gonna grow to not like them, you will too.

Skylah & Shawn rodriguez: Andreas parents
Most laid back chill parents ever, my fav tbh.

(More characters might come in idk yet)

Hope you like the story and vote pls 🙏🏽