Love Is For Weirdos

I'm sorry if the story sucks. I wrote this for a close friend of mine. I would still appreciate some criticism though so I know how to improve, but please don't be too harsh. And for people who are actually going to read it thank you for taking a look at the story. Also I will continue the story. I jut want to see the reactions to the first chapter.

Description: What happens when two girls fall in love with a lovable American and a tomato growing Spaniard? Read to find out.