Escape of a Raven -rewritten-
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  • Parts 12
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Ongoing, First published Oct 09, 2023
Mature
this is the edited and rewritten version of Escape of a raven.
I hope you enjoy this improved tale of a queen.
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In that moment, I feel captivated, rooted to the spot, as he approaches with a sense of purpose and anticipation.

I suddenly snap out of my trance as Kyan gracefully halts in front of me. Feeling a rush of excitement, I gracefully fall into a curtsy. "Y-your majesty." I gracefully maintain the curtsy, keeping my head down, a confident finger lifts my chin up with a gentle touch.

"Rise." His deep and husky voice is incredibly soothing as I straighten myself, feeling a wave of warmth wash over me. Without hesitation, he reaches out his hand, and I instinctively intertwine my fingers with his. Even as our eyes lock, he gracefully lifts my hand to his lips and plants a gentle kiss on top, causing my heart to race with excitement. I can't help but blush, realizing that he might just be able to hear the pounding rhythm of my heartbeat. "I don't think I've had the pleasure of meeting you." 

His husky voice has become even stronger now, and I am filled with awe as I struggle to respond, completely breathless by the presence of the remarkable man standing before me. "M-my name is Zerro. Your highness." My voice trembles out. 

"May I have this dance, Lady Zerro."

"Ah, you must not speak formally with me, your imperial majesty I'm-I'm just a maid." I stumble out as I try to break free from the enchanting hold his eyes seem to have on me. Sparkling like a lush forest bathed in warm sunlight, his eyes beckon me towards a world full of endless possibilities.

He smirks at my words. "Just a maid. You're brave for a maid." His smirk grows, radiating a playful glint in his eyes. "I've never had a maid correct me." 

My heart fills with concern as I quickly lower my head, realizing my mistake. "My apologies, your majesty-" I'm pleasantly surprised to feel his hand gently lifting my chin once more.
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✅ Desire To Control Her (Manan)

9 parts Complete Mature

He was the strictest Dom, loves to control women and she was a free bird, didn't like to be controlled by anybody. He was into the BDSM and she hates it. He was finding a challenging submissive for himself and she was a perfect match for him but she wasn't ready to accept his offer because she lived her life without any rules and regulations. She wanted to fly high like a free bird without any limitations. He has a burning desire to control her because she was his perfect choice but she was a hard nut to crack. He was crazy to make her his submissive and control her mind, soul and body. His desire to control her will fulfil or not? Or his desire to control her will change into the desire to make her his? To know these answers join the cute and intense journey of the hot and strictest Master and his cute little butterfly. *** "I flared up by looking at the person like you." "What do you mean by this?" "I mean you're a Dominant who controls people life and I hate it." "You don't know anything, butterfly. At least experience it, then hate it." "It will be better if I throw you out of the cafe by kicking your ass." His eyes widened a bit in shock. "This will also be a new experience for me." I grinned. "Butterfly, you will regret if you ever do this to me or even say this to me again." His tone became stern suddenly. "Oh, I'm so scared." I scoffed. "Fuck you and get the hell out of my cafe if you don't want me to kick your ass." He frowned and dragged me to the backside of the cafe by seizing my wrist. Then he pushed me into the party hall and hurriedly locked the door. "What the fuck do you think of yourself? You," "Shut up." He roared, cutting my words. He again grasped my wrist and dragged me to the sofa. He sat down and with a swift motion, he yanked me down and bent me over his lap. He pinned me against the sofa by pressing his hand on my back and locked my legs between his legs. What he is doing? Fear rushed down my spine.