With darkness comes death

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I wake to a sharp cold sting through me but just relies it's probably my sisters idea of a joke she knows I believe in them. By them I mean ghost demons and zombies. I fell the cold hit me again and I slightly open my eyes but no one is there how weird.

" Sahara I know your doing this and I would appreciate it if you stopped I'm trying to get to sleep" I say wearily

No one answers but I have the felling their still there so I just sigh and get up and turn the lights on but no ones there only my reflection in the mirror witch I am not proud of I see a pale green eyed girl staring back at me she could be thiner.