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An original script (screenplay) written for my creative writing course in 2021.
Please let me know what you think!
(forgive me for the formatting - I don't know how to translate the script format to this format and it got messed up)
NOTE: This is not a complete draft meant for the screen but the beginning stages of one.
Grade Received: A
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