A Life in a Coma (Short Story)
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Complete, First published Oct 13, 2023
An old man is in a coma, he experiences a lot of spiritual things that are going to unfold in his Life, and the loss of a friend. He goes through a self-discovery journey to remember his friend's death. That was over 50 years ago, this story will include emotions that are very strong and beautiful. This story I wrote for an assignment in my Language Arts Class, came to mind, and wanted to share this on Wattpad. It means a lot to me to share this story that I made with my own emotions that I was going through and I had a tough time during this Year. So please Enjoy the story!
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