A PRESENCE THAT LEFT ME HOLLOW
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Last published Thu, Dec 27, 2012
If you ever ask someone the question about believing in ghosts or supernatural things, you would either get a good old laugh on your face or a curt answer. Almost everyone rejects the idea of such existence and believe that in this modern and fast world there is no place for such nuisance BUT and believe me there is a but…there is always a doubt buried in your mind which surfaces in dark situations. The best part is nobody is ready to admit this feeling. I used to be the same…the very same… until God chose to test me. This is my story. It will make you scream and cry. It will make you shiver in fear. It will be a roller coaster you will regret sitting on. Don’t say you hadn’t been warned…
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