The better plot
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I read a story and thought the plot wasn't that great. So I decided to make the changes I thought would make for better entertainment, despite having been told that I "cAn'T cRiTiCiZe OtHeR pEoPlE's WoRk If I wRiTe ToO", sweetie, once I threw away 12 chapters because the readers told me where I was heading would make for a shitty plot and I changed directions at the feedback.
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The one where Jeongyeon gets stabbed in the back but manages to get through it.
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