Game, Set, Match. (Student Teacher)
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Last published Sun, Mar 22, 2015
A re-write of my finished novel Game, Set, Match. This story will have the same storyline/ish and the same characters with a few tweaks. I am trying to improve my writing skills and would love to hear any constructive criticism you have. I am not removing the old version, nor am i saying i will not update 'Well Played' in the future. I am simply exploring a different version of the old story line :)
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19 year old Kelly has secured herself a place in the UK’s most prestigious tennis academy by the skin of her teeth. Having failed the entry try-outs the previous year she was going to have to change her life style in order to stand a chance of achieving her long standing dream of becoming a pro player. Will she stick to her new vows to give up partying and men? Or will her devastatingly handsome and off limits coach side track her into a forbidden game of hearts?
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