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Celestial (Unedited)

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This is an official novel that I am currently working on. I won't post the whole thing on here, only the first quarter or half of it. I'd like some feedback. I know it needs a lot of work and editing, so I'll update once I edit under a new title (I'm thinking Celestial Edit 1, Celestial Edit 2, etc) until I get consistent positive feedback. This is the raw unedited and poorly put together version. I'm mostly posting this version to see if readers would be interested in this story at all. Once I'm finished editing everything, the whole thing will be available on Amamzon.com.

Premise: The story revolves around two main characters, Celeste and Finlay. One is a human and the other is a hamean. They live in a world where humans and hameans coexist, however their peace is heavily dependent on the four deities that rule over heaven. When the four deities disappear from the heavens above, the two races feel their mania begin to worsen and their hatred for each other becomes almost intolerable. How will this world function without their gods and goddesses? Will they return? Why'd they disappear? Where are they? Is the world doomed forever? Follow Finlay, the King of the United, who strives to overcome the mania and tries bring together the two races, and Celeste, a timid human who is chosen to search for the truth before the world is ruined for good. Everything is weighing down on their shoulders. Will they be able to find their deities in time?
I hope whoever comes across this story finds it interesting, even if you cringe at the pacing and the dialogue and things like that. I'm still in the process of finding consistency with their personalities and finding the right tone, but the more I write, the more in sync I feel with my story. Any feedback is appreciated. I'm really anxious to get this story out. Hope you like it!All Rights Reserved

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Summary by XLuzette

(The contents of this book are mostly outdated right now! Feel free to just ignore it, it's also really bad and features some strange stances I don't identify with at this point ¯\_(ツ)_/¯. I'll hopefully get around to updating it soon, but I might have to rethink the whole core concept of it, so it might be a while.) A summary of the timeline (most) of my stories take place in. The first chapters run down the general events taking place in Generation C up to 4, though I have to warn you that Gen C is the most chaotic and makes almost no sense due to me not wanting to tread into spoiler territory, the other three Generations are calmer. Generation referring to not a batch of people, but a certain time frame that is determined by how long something or someone survived, usually the Deities of that Generation if said Generation had any. The following chapters go through some general terms and other things different about this world like the different races. I actually wrote this down on paper about one and a half years ago, so I had to rewrite the general summary so it makes a little more sense.

Jamie Dale - The Eleven Kingdoms by AngryLoveBite

This is a full length novel I wrote between the years of 2014-2017, my writing style has been all over the place through those years since I started writing it since I was 15 and ended it when I was 18. I wanted to show the story to the world but I know it isn't good enough to be properly published since there is plenty of spelling errors and for some reason 15 year old me was trying to write as edgy as possible. So my outlook on how this story is as changed I think it's very mediocre as I am now and kinda of just wanted it to end. However I still kinda want people to read it or at least get some satisfaction from it so I'm posting it. Demons, Angels, and Aliens what do they all have in common? They're all apart of Jamie Dale's life and as he looks upon the cliff wanting to jump he writes down the events that unfolded that lead him to that cliff.

Overanalyze - Destiel by penguin_overlord

Lots of overdoing. Castiel Novak was a 22 years old bass guitarist in a band called "Kings Of Purgatory" with his best friends Dean, Gabe and Benny. The band was gaining popularity and the guys were getting more and more famous everyday; but there was a problem. Cas had been crushing on his fellow band mate for 4 years now. It wasn't THAT bad at first. Yeah, Dean didn't probably didn't share his feelings but he was still there, right next to him, every day; which was more than enough for Cas. Until he, like the flick of a switch, wasn't. Now Cas was overanalyzing, and overthinking; why was Dean being so distant to him all of a sudden? // this is a destiel au (alternative universe) with lots of sabriel on the side. there are no monsters, no demons, no angels, and especially no wendigos *audible wink* in this fanfiction. there are no deaths, no self harm, no triggers I know of, mild swearing, and no smut (except it's hinted). if there is anything that bothers you with this fic, please message me. also if you spot any mistakes or triggers, again, message me. if you would like to leave constructive criticism, please do because that will be very... constructive. I don't know where the original photo from the cover is from, but if it's your edit then tell me and I will credit you or take it down (it's up to you). this story takes place in a fictional town called "Courtney" in California. HUGE thanks to @fcktheimagery who listened to me blab about this story for hours and helped me come up with awesome stuff, and proved to me that Bela isn't blond. I don't think I could've been as proud of this as I am if it wasn't for her. (go follow her) [original title was overanalyze, overpack, overreact - destiel; but it was too long. now the title only remains like that on the cover]

True Mates: Supers After the War by AmberRawlings0

I never put trigger warnings as I mark all my books as mature but I realized this one should have one for sure. Please read with caution. This book is a continuation of True Mates but takes a very different direction. I have had trouble writing this so please let me know if anything you think could use some work. The first two chapters are almost an exact repeat of the last two from the first book to try and tie them together. Follow Astra and Ezra as they explore their new pack and new relationships. All your favourites return, some likely making you hate them. Introduce in Bennett and the group is rounded out. The Super Omegas, Astra and Ezra, are given the task of saving Omegas with the help of the triplets. They try to navigate this with their mates and their insecurities. How will this all play out? Can Supers save the werewolf world?

Resurgence by thebellesmith

The year is 2098 and the world has been inhabitable 3 times in the past century due to not-so-natural disasters, but the human race bounced back every time. After surviving in an underwater bunker for 15 years, 5 young adults are sent out to scope out the land to start over. Again. Three soldiers-one of them being the daughter of the Chief of North America-and two scientists began their journey feeling more or less hopeful about the road ahead. But less than 48 hours after stepping onto the surface, they realize it's not as safe as they thought and there are enemies-dead and alive-lurking in every corner. - AN: Obviously it's still a work in progress, but I'm hoping to get some comments and feedback about what I have so far so maybe I can one day publish when it's done. I also have plot lines for two other books that take place years after this one ends so it's a possible trilogy! I edited some things along the way but never really reviewed it as a whole so there may be some inconsistencies so let me know if you see any or any plot holes. I'm also open to suggestions. Thank you!

Nightwalker by Social_Introvert

Time didn't matter to her. She got up when the sun did and tried to sleep when the sun went down. because of this seemingly endlessness, she's forgotten her name, she's forgotten her family and she's forgotten everything she use to be. Now she was nothing. Living on the streets of a town begging for money and food from travellers that didn't know who she was, unlike the rest of the town that thought of her as something unnatural even though she doesn't know why. Constantly abused by the townspeople who don't understand her, she is left to die in an alleyway after a horrible run in with three drunk men. She was expecting to die and have her corpse eaten by rats and other vermin. What she didn't expect was to be saved by a woman that was everything but human. "Do you want to live?" This woman asked and when she looked into herself she knew the answer, it came easy through her busted lips. "Yes." From that day on she became something else, something not human, something extraordinary and from that day forth she will serve this woman who saved her life and maybe one day remember her name or be given one by her new Mistress. Maybe one day she'll remember who she was and maybe she'll even find the one person that completes her soul. From that day forth she became a Nightwalker. Completed. This is a lesbian story and contains mature actions between females. There will be warnings at the beginning of the chapter if you do not wish to read such content.

cracks//tmr inspired by pieceofklunk

book one (make sure to check out the characters first!) ✧･ﾟ: *✧･ﾟ:* 　　 *:･ﾟ✧*:･ﾟ✧ The earth is flat. Everybody once lived all together on their one big island in the sky. It was known as Leviff. one day, the cracks came. Leviff was split into 7 different islands. It was catastrophic, nobody knew what had happened, or what had triggered them. The only thing people knew was fear. ✧･ﾟ: *✧･ﾟ:* 　　 *:･ﾟ✧*:･ﾟ✧ this is a story i created. i was mainly influenced from tmr (maze runner). so that would explain some similarities. i have the story roughly mapped out. i really want to hear some feedback. its nowhere near completed, but i have a really intriguing story line, to be accompanied by several prequels. it's deceiving, because i have 40+chapters, but only 1 "part." but there is more than one chapter. so, i want to hear all your feedback, i'm only thirteen tho, so take it easy on me ;) i present to you, my masterpiece of 34,000+ words that i am very proud of! enjoy♡ (don't know if i'm supposed to put this in here, but i own all the characters. i created all of them )

Memories by AnyOldStranger

Before you read the summary, I want you to know that this isn't a story about paranormal beings falling in love, with each other or ordinary people. It is about the horrifying and unusual consequences caused be love. "How?" You may wonder...well I guess you'll just have to read and find out. "There was still something there that rang so familiar inside of him, in a place he had long forgotten about. But as a word hangs from one's lips at precise time it's needed or a person is overcome with an overwhelming sense of déjà vu, he just couldn't figure out where he had seen her before. Before this city. Before the last city. Before the city before that. Maybe even before Hell itself." A man's unusual beginning leaves him empty and without a memory. All he knows is that he doesn't belong here, but there is literally no way in Hell he would ever go back to where he came from. Will he choose to be who he once was? Or risk never regaining any of his memories ever again? I was also wondering if you could give me some feedback on the story! It's my first full story I've ever written and I was wondering what's working, what isn't making sense. If you could help me out I'd be really grateful!

Together At Last (HIATUS) by Almond_the_weirdo

This is a story I've written mostly for myself on Google Docs, but I have decided to publish it. It's unfinished so far, and is a 4X-centric XFHOV Au (yes yes a 2nd one and only 6 chapters into my other Au) anyway yeah TW: possible blood/gore, mentions of demons and soul summoning, death, 4x, 4 and 2 being siblings, just a drop of lime (aka kisses and getting pinned down but that's IT I SWEAR), Six X Nine bc yes, and POSSIBLE One X Two, Nine mostly using female pronouns (i can't write frying pan genders they are so hard okay??), more death bc it's also a demon-centric au (what do u expect some people gotta die), and POSSIBLE gore but idk yet Desc: X has been living their life, carrying the heavy guilt of their closest friend's death on their back for years. But when they finally find a way to bring Four back, he's not exactly the same...

Drain My Soul by Rach0308

- CONTENTS MATURE! 18+ scenes - Celeste believed nothing more than being a normal girl, in a normal street, in a normal world but nothing can just be normal? Right? Well this idea of a normal life, stops for Celeste and she goes back to her parents home town, where she is forced by law to a mating ball and is convinced she is something she is not.... But when she meets a blue eyed handsome man that is not who he seems, she is intrigued and is ready to explore. Follow Celeste on her journey to find out who she really is, discover the world she believes is insane and will these blue eyes help her? ------ "I effect you as much as you effect me and it pains me to see my mate with another" he whispers in my ear. I gulp deeply and I want to drop to my knees, to plead that my life is in his hands. Although I gulp and shake my head. "Fine, but I'll be there and I'll be watching!" He whispers in hush tones. I gulp and feel the pain again in my chest. His blue eyes come back to my own and I don't even give him a smirk. He lets go of my jaw and with in a flash I see him leave. The thought in my mind is that my mate is fucking hot and I don't know how long I can deny that for or deny the inseparable connection between us. ---- A/N Just a quick note to say that this book indeed does need heavy editing and as a Co-writer I find this story not in my favour. I know the main character Celeste may come across as mean and as a comment mentioned 'annoying' this book will go through editing. But I'd you choose to still read then fantastic! It's our first 'mate' and 'vampire' book so please be kind and all comments will be taken into consideration. Thank you L&R x

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Jamie Dale - The Eleven Kingdoms cover

Overanalyze - Destiel cover

True Mates: Supers After the War cover

Resurgence cover

Nightwalker cover

cracks//tmr inspired cover

Together At Last (HIATUS) cover

Drain My Soul cover

Summary

(The contents of this book are mostly outdated right now! Feel free to just ignore it, it's also really bad and features some strange stances I don't identify with at this point ¯\_(ツ)_/¯. I'll hopefully get around to updating it soon, but I might have to rethink the whole core concept of it, so it might be a while.) A summary of the timeline (most) of my stories take place in. The first chapters run down the general events taking place in Generation C up to 4, though I have to warn you that Gen C is the most chaotic and makes almost no sense due to me not wanting to tread into spoiler territory, the other three Generations are calmer. Generation referring to not a batch of people, but a certain time frame that is determined by how long something or someone survived, usually the Deities of that Generation if said Generation had any. The following chapters go through some general terms and other things different about this world like the different races. I actually wrote this down on paper about one and a half years ago, so I had to rewrite the general summary so it makes a little more sense.