Celestial (Unedited)

This is an official novel that I am currently working on. I won't post the whole thing on here, only the first quarter or half of it. I'd like some feedback. I know it needs a lot of work and editing, so I'll update once I edit under a new title (I'm thinking Celestial Edit 1, Celestial Edit 2, etc) until I get consistent positive feedback. This is the raw unedited and poorly put together version. I'm mostly posting this version to see if readers would be interested in this story at all. Once I'm finished editing everything, the whole thing will be available on Amamzon.com.

Premise: The story revolves around two main characters, Celeste and Finlay. One is a human and the other is a hamean. They live in a world where humans and hameans coexist, however their peace is heavily dependent on the four deities that rule over heaven. When the four deities disappear from the heavens above, the two races feel their mania begin to worsen and their hatred for each other becomes almost intolerable. How will this world function without their gods and goddesses? Will they return? Why'd they disappear? Where are they? Is the world doomed forever? Follow Finlay, the King of the United, who strives to overcome the mania and tries bring together the two races, and Celeste, a timid human who is chosen to search for the truth before the world is ruined for good. Everything is weighing down on their shoulders. Will they be able to find their deities in time?
I hope whoever comes across this story finds it interesting, even if you cringe at the pacing and the dialogue and things like that. I'm still in the process of finding consistency with their personalities and finding the right tone, but the more I write, the more in sync I feel with my story. Any feedback is appreciated. I'm really anxious to get this story out. Hope you like it!