Surrendering
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Last published Sat, May 18, 2024
"Love conquers all things; let us too surrender to love"
-Virgil
Ahmed's heart is a danger zone sealed with concrete walls no one dares to approach.Behind the four indestructible walls, he hides noxious blizzards and gigantic glaciers.Frigid winds guard it on his command, petrifying undesired visitors foolish enough to come exploring these perilous territories in search of the Ahmed they sense is lost. How naive were they to not realize that Ahmed is gone ,forever,buried deep under a pile of the same snow that spreads out over acres of the frozen,barren moors of his heart.
The task was to thaw the icicles and penetrate his sealed heart.The girl appointed for this deadly assignment was Asiya Kabir,a gentle soul, with a kind,caring heart.She has her own grudges with life for the innumerable occasions it tried to drag her to the mud but yet she trudges along as a stoic soldier.
When their lives clash,will love manage to bloom in the snow covered plains of Ahmed's heart?Is Asiya strong enough to cope with the burden of trauma and agony that comes with loving a broken man like Ahmed?Or will destiny be looking down and mirthlessly laugh at the perfect spectacle their lives will become?
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