The Tearmoon Princess in the Kingdom of Remno (with some illustrations)
39 parts Complete After much convincing, Abel has agreed to bring Mia for a formal visit to his home in Remno. He tries to explain to her that his apprehension is due to something much darker than a teenager's embarrassment over his parents. When they finally arrive, even Abel is not prepared for the Remno that his father has prepared for the Princess.
Expect to find a bit of Tearmoon sweetness and humor, mixed in with some darker elements (much like the original story). I have attempted to explore the darker elements with a light touch without downplaying the seriousness of the issues being explored.
Mia, Abel, Anne, the Emperor, and Ludwig are the usual suspects present in this story. A serious effort has been made to stay true to the personalities of the main characters and the general tone of the series but I have given myself free rein to have fun with characters that were undeveloped through the first 9 volumes of the series or create new characters that were needed to make this story work. Through 9 volumes this story has no great conflicts with Tearmoon continuity, but that will certainly change as more volumes are added to the main series.
"Anne's Epilogue " was added a few months after the original story-I was happy with how the story originally ended, but then I thought it sort of needed a goodbye from Anne to close it out (or maybe I just wasn't ready to say goodby to Anne and Mia, so I just had to write some more?) I like how the Epilogue turned out, so hooray for me!
I think that this is a very fun story that any Tearmoon fan can enjoy.
Respectful constructive criticism is appreciated. Other than "Chapter 0 for Volume 1 which is also available on Wattpad, I have never done anything like this before. I love Tearmoon Empire, and I hope that shows in this story!
Thanks, Jeoff
Note: the version that I put on Royal Road is a little cleaner, but if you prefer this app, you won't really miss anything by using it, and you will get a map here!