Some Basic TB x GB Story(Kinda cringe sorry)
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This is a simple Golf ball x Tennis ball Battle for Dream Island romance story. This is the serious version of the story, while the person I'm collaborating with is creating a lower-quality version. This story may be basic, but feel free to add feedback and criticism in the comments. Anything you criticize, I will take into consideration when/if I write future pieces. Just a reminder, there's always room for improvement, but you are good enough!
Edit: THIS STORY IS BASICALLY ME PUTTING SAD THOUGHTS INTO TB AND GB :sob:
(I republished this story, it was made in like November 2023)
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