Under your command 🪢
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  • Reads 54,670
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  • Parts 43
  • Time 16h 3m
Ongoing, First published Nov 18, 2023
Mature
"I couldn't get enough of him. I was tired and sore but I didn't care. I didn't want to sleep. I wanted the ache. I wanted him in me, all the time. 
His weight on top of me. I wanted to squeeze him in further and further. I wanted to watch his face. I wanted his sweat to drop onto me. I wanted to drop mine on him.
 I got on top of him. I'd never done it before. I couldn't really believe it; I was doing this. I was inventing something. I held him and put him in. He felt deeper in me."

"I never imagined that something like this was even possible between us. I was getting addicted to the pain he inflicted on me like a drug does to its addict. His pheromones put me in a trance."

"There were bruises on my body, and sometimes I left numb from the pain, yet I wanted him to give me the pain. I begged him like a thirsty slut. I know I sound like a sick pathetic whore. But you don't know how much I.... I must obey my master, or else I will be punished "
    
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This is a BDSM story, involving Dominant- Submissive relationship. There would be use of foul words, mention of sex toys. Dominance, submission, sadism, masochism. 

             *A devil and an angel huh?*

This is a First Khaotung story. 
Other important characters in this story-
Earth and Mix   
TayTawan and New/Newwiee


P.S- The first part of the story has been inspired from a popular novel. I repeat only the first part. 🤭
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