When We Fall~Tobias Eaton/Four
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Last published Wed, Nov 29, 2023
After having enough of the abuse at home, Quinn knows what she has to do in order to escape. She has to make a brave decision in leaving Amity and moving to Dauntless.
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"What's your name?" The man in front of me asks.
"Quinn.....What's yours?" After some hesitation, I ask, not really knowing if polite is a thing here in this scary place.
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