Bitter Sweet Storm (MLP Fan Story)
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  • Time 2h 14m
Ongoing, First published Nov 24, 2023
A My Little Pony alternate timeline story.
Suggested by @Oddity999

A dragon named Ace Storm leaves the horde during the migration to find his own path, but in his journey hi is struck by magical lightning strikes. They pierce his scales and form a mark on his chest. When he wakes up, Ace can no longer breath fire, and now manipulates electricity. With this new power, he becomes target for the Storm King. He captures Ace, steals his magic, and forces him to submit to him and his commander, Tempest. 

Years later, the Mane 6 defeat the Storm King and Ace's magic returns to him. He escapes from his captivity and destroys the place he was imprisoned. However, it isn't enough for Ace. He sets out on a mission to annihilate all the allies of the Storm King. When he finds Tempest, he meets the Mane 6, but this meeting isn't filled with friendship and rainbows.

~

I own absolutely nothing about My Little Pony. This is simply a fun story I created based on a concept someone gave me.
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