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Where Did We Go Wrong?
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Complete, First published Nov 28, 2023
Mature
Liliana and Derek were a married couple of 2 wonderful years. Liliana worked as a fashion designer and Derek owned his own book store. One day Liliana and Derek had a serious fight, which ended in Liliana staying the night at her sister's place. 

Derek called his wife's phone over and over like crazy, with dread, worry, and anger filling his body he went out to a night club with his friends to cool down for a bit. 

while at the club he stumbles upon a beautiful blonde girl named Vanessa. Vanessa looked like a super model to most men, but Derek had a wife whom he truly loved and he wasn't gonna have an affair with any other woman.....or so he thought. 

After the affair happened, Derek felt ashamed of himself. How was he gonna tell his wife about this?!

After things amend with the two love birds, things went back to normal. Derek almost forgot about the affair with Vanessa. 

 Liliana got a job offer over in New York city and needed someone to take care of the house, she wanted Derek to go with her but he disagreed, telling her he has to stay and watch his book store. 

Understanding her husband's worry for his store she said she was gonna hire a house sitter to watch the house while he was at work. Derek agreed and they both called a house sitter, but who should walk through the door? none other than.....Vanessa. 

What's gonna happen to Derek's and Liliana's marriage now?

Read more to find out.
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