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Where Did We Go Wrong?
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Complete, First published Nov 28, 2023
Mature
Liliana and Derek were a married couple of 2 wonderful years. Liliana worked as a fashion designer and Derek owned his own book store. One day Liliana and Derek had a serious fight, which ended in Liliana staying the night at her sister's place. 

Derek called his wife's phone over and over like crazy, with dread, worry, and anger filling his body he went out to a night club with his friends to cool down for a bit. 

while at the club he stumbles upon a beautiful blonde girl named Vanessa. Vanessa looked like a super model to most men, but Derek had a wife whom he truly loved and he wasn't gonna have an affair with any other woman.....or so he thought. 

After the affair happened, Derek felt ashamed of himself. How was he gonna tell his wife about this?!

After things amend with the two love birds, things went back to normal. Derek almost forgot about the affair with Vanessa. 

 Liliana got a job offer over in New York city and needed someone to take care of the house, she wanted Derek to go with her but he disagreed, telling her he has to stay and watch his book store. 

Understanding her husband's worry for his store she said she was gonna hire a house sitter to watch the house while he was at work. Derek agreed and they both called a house sitter, but who should walk through the door? none other than.....Vanessa. 

What's gonna happen to Derek's and Liliana's marriage now?

Read more to find out.
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What if everything you see isn't exactly that? What if Sookie and her cousins decide to marry for revenge? What if during this arranged marriage, they discover that their respective partners are their soul mates? What if in this marriage of convenience, she discovers that he is her first and greatest love? Would you be able to endure a loveless marriage, based on lies, deceit and betrayal? What would you be able to do for the love of your life? What would happen if you both didn't know you married your first love? For love, would you be able to endure being humiliated for not having the same social status as your partner? Would they be willing to continue with their revenge or would they be carried away by the immense love they feel for them? When they discover the truth, will love be able to endure and resist lies, betrayals, deceits and a terrible thirst for revenge? Nathaniel and Sookie, when they were fifteen years old, lived the greatest of loves and due to fate, they had to separate. Sookie is an independent woman, who has worked all her life and has forgotten the flame of first love. Nathaniel is a womanizer, who is with every woman as if they were part of his sport or his collection. Due to fate and life, they meet again years later and in strange circumstances, because he is looking for a woman who fills that immense void that he feels and believes that, by getting married, he would fill that void left by his first and great love. On the other hand, Sookie is looking for someone who will protect her and that is why the two end up getting married. Together they will discover the traps of destiny and will have to fight for their love and prove to all the people who do not believe in their love that they love each other madly. Can they be immensely happy?