Cry of Menace

Dr. Kenjiro Takahashi is a brain surgeon from Germany, who lives his life peacefully. He has everything a man could ask for: He has a beautiful wife, a nice house, the newest car, just the whole pack. That is, until a mysterious patient of his comes along.

(This story is an idea I had for an English writing assignment. My teacher said I had a gift in writing, but that this story would be better of as a roman, meaning my text was too long. Nothing is edited, meaning the grammar might not be correct. I may write a longer story like this later)