Twisted heart (Alex x Jules)

This a Fan-Fiction of Alex and Jules from the twisted series, I'm an Absolute big fan of the real plot but I really wanted to write the stories from a totally different point of view.... Thank you for your understanding...

preview of the story:

"I trusted you with my whole heart,"
he said, his voice thick with pain.
"You were the only person I dared to love, even when my heart screamed at me to pull away."

His words pierced through me like a sharp knife, twisting deeper with each syllable. He was holding the gun to my forehead, and I could feel the cold metal pressing against my skin.
A small gasp escaped my lips, the air catching in my throat.
"I'm so-" I started, but my voice shattered, breaking under the weight of my emotions.
"Don't!" he commanded, his eyes blazing with desperation, cutting me off before I could finish.
Tears streamed down my cheeks, soaking into my skin, mingling with the fear and heartbreak. I didn't care about dying; in that moment, the only thing that mattered was saving him from this darkness, even if it meant sacrificing my own life.

Author's note: I'm an amateur writer and a learner who would love to read about your opinion regarding my work
Please let me know about my mistakes and what should I do to improve the story
I welcome all the helpful criticism for improvement
and thank you for reading this
I hope you will like the story