New Story?

Ok guys so I'm kinda iffy about writing this. I mean I like it and all but still. So I need you guys to read what I have so far and either vote or comment(comment with yes or no's) to tell me if you would read a story like this and also I don't know what to call it so if you guys want to leave some titles something about love being dangerous and stuff cause I suck at comming up with titles. Anyways here it is! Goodbye my little pumpernikles!
P.S. I will fan and dedicate the next chapter to who ever gives me a title(if I decide to write it)