Losing Control

Losing Control

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A young girl at the age of 15 gets kidnapped and experimented on, once she turned 16 she got moved from isolation to a room that was shared with her and a roommate. Her roommate has a lot of secrets that he's not willing to share, but as their relationship deepens he starts to share more. The story can take you through lots of plot twists as well as different levels of anticipation. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ᴡᴀʀɴɪɴɢ: ᴛʜᴇ ꜰᴏʟʟᴏᴡɪɴɢ ᴄᴏɴᴛᴇɴᴛ ᴄᴏɴᴛᴀɪɴꜱ: ᴛᴏʀᴛᴜʀᴇ, ʙʟᴏᴏᴅ, ɢᴏʀᴇ ᴇᴛᴄ. ɪꜰ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ ɴᴏᴛ ᴄᴏᴍꜰᴏʀᴛᴀʙʟᴇ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴘʟᴇᴀꜱᴇ ᴋᴇᴇᴘ ʟᴏᴏᴋɪɴɢ ᴛʜɪꜱ ꜱᴛᴏʀʏ ɪꜱɴ'ᴛ ꜰᴏʀ ʏᴏᴜ. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ None of the art is mine, but i can't find the original artists ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 𝓐𝓷𝔂𝔀𝓪𝔂𝓼 𝓔𝓷𝓳𝓸𝔂 𝓣𝓱𝓮 𝓢𝓽𝓸𝓻𝔂, 𝓐𝓷𝓭 𝓒𝓸𝓶𝓶𝓮𝓷𝓽 𝓨𝓸𝓾𝓻 𝓕𝓮𝓮𝓭𝓫𝓪𝓬𝓴! 💖 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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What would you do if there was a Monster that one day popped up in your life? uninvited and seemed to know exactly where you were at all times? What if it almost ended your life? Would you tell someone and risk being told that you're crazy? Maria asks herself the same questions and she can't help but to wonder, why does it hunt her so? Can she figure out a way to make it disappear? And most importantly Will she survive? _____________________________________________ In this gruesome horror story the events take place in modern day West Virginia which is where you will meet Maria Nichole Grey: a young and lonely fifteen year old girl that is still grieving the death of her father who died in a car accident seven years ago, leaving her with her aloof mother who was almost never home to witness the strange and dangerous happenings that keep Maria in constant danger. Maria wasn't sure why or how the entity haunted her; she never played with a ouija bound and she never chanted Bloody Mary in her bathroom but on this particular day, when she was home alone, a huge terrifying Monster pounced on her from her closet and attacked her in her own room, the Monster itself was a huge, horrifying, sinister entity with startling glowing yellow eyes that seemed to stare into her soul. The Monster seems to only be interested in Maria and targets her specifically, She has no clue as to why it's haunting her, no, hunting her, but she's determined to find out and put a stop to it before it can send the grim reaper her way. (Mature for gore & violence) (Word count around 60,000) (Also this was one of my first stories that I've written, I hope you like it! ♥︎) (Also this is in serious need of a rewrite which I hope to do later in the future ♥︎)

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