Fallen (boy x boy)

there are some things about me. this is my first fanfiction and it could be cringe too. there will be many writing mistakes because English is not my native language and when you (the reader) are noticing mistakes or have tips for me then please tell me, im allways open for advice.

abt the story: the story is about a demon and an angel. Sariel(the angel) was doing his daily things as a guardian angel but noticed something weird about a human with red eyes and black and red hair. together with his best frend Amy (who is a cupid) they went to earth to see what the weird human really is.

But what they didn't know was, that the weird human REALLY is a demon that goes by the name Amon.

Sariel and Amy went to earth and started looking trough the City they lived in. And Amy went to a Shop. While Sariel was waiting he saw Amon and so the story beginns

By the way Amy and Sariel May be best frends, but they are dating infont of Sariel's father, because his father wannts him to marry and Sariel never really fell in love with one so he decided that he will "date" Amy till he falls in love with an angel.

Tipps:
"Talking"
(Authorths note)
*doing*
"When you talking and there is " this" special Tone"