the first kill

the first kill

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WpMetadataReadComplete Fri, Mar 27, 2015<5 mins
here i was about to kill another person and i froze. i kill people all the time now so why did i freeze? it was because this particular person reminded me of my first kill. it was autumn in Maine about six years ago when i someone get mugged. that person was my little sister and the mugger killed her before i could help. i spent the next two years tracking this guy down. when i finally found him he was at home with his wife and three daughters. This made me so mad. How could he have three girls and kill my sister and not have nightmares about his girls getting mugged. i had to kill him. i had to right there and then. I broke down the front door and grabbed a knife that was on the kitchen counter and just kept stabbing him. i must have stabbed him at least twenty times before his wife pulled me away from him. from that point on i decided to fight for good people. know that i look at this person i realize that it is one of that mans daughters! i must have made her think the same way i am now. so what should i do kill her or let her go?
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Blaze White is the New Girl at the Prep school in her mothers old home town. But her only goal for senior year is to keep a low profile, no friends, no parties and NO boys. Axel may be adored and worshipped by his peer-but he hates people, except 5. So when a beautiful but closed off girl suddenly enters his group. He is not welcoming of the mysterious beauty despite the pull they both feel. •••• WARNING: This was written many moons ago. I have decided to put it back up because of a large request from readers. However, I was a kid when I wrote this so take it with a grain of salt. *** Like a deer in head lights, I freeze and watch as the car comes towards me expecting to get hit. But to my surprise, the car swerves to the side slightly next to me and comes to a stop. I take a deep breath I didn't know I was holding at the driver's side door swings open and a very pissed off Axel steps out. "Thank god," I mumble and place my hands on my knees to catch my breath. "Blaze?" He says and I hate it. I hate how he says my name as if it's his. Like he knows it's the only thing I want to hear, him calling out to me, looking at me, focused to me. It's the first time in my life I wanted someone's attention so badly I didn't care how I got it. And that was too dangerous for me to hold onto. "Are you insane or some shit? I could have killed you!" He says and starts to walk towards me. I take a big breath and step back away from him, "s-stop! Axel," I stutter still panting. It's then he notices the blood on my hands and shirt. "Is that blood?" He asks staring at my shirt and I take another step back. "Stop, stay b-back," I try to say confidently but I can't even breath right. Realizing he won't listen I start to turn around planning to make a break for it. "Don't run from me Blaze it won't go well," he growls reading my thoughts causing me to freeze in my spot. "Do not ever think you can get away from me."

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