Undertale Yellow: Ceroba's Afterstory

This story happens after the pacifist route of Undertale Yellow (spoilers from this point onwards) and focuses on Ceroba trying to find a new reason to live after losing everything she once held dear to her. This story was made just to get my thoughts off of my head, feel free to criticize this as its still a heavy WIP and this is the first project I've published, I want to know what people think