Fixing the present
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Last published Mon, Dec 18, 2023
The pandavas and the kauravas, two sets of brothers, ready to duel their enemity out.
What happens when they get to know that neither of them were eligible for the throne??
Who is this new person coming into the mix? Older brother?? wasn't Yudhisthira the oldest?!!
And what is this about seeing the future??!!!?!
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