Divergent (A Rewrite)
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Last published Thu, Jan 18, 2024
I personally don't like how Divergent was written with constant plot holes and the story line through the trilogy just never made sense. So I decided to rewrite it. Again these are just my opinions and no disrespect to Veronica Roth, I am also a writer and I am the harshest critic of my own writing and I'm sure Veronica is the harshest critic of her own writing. Please don't see this as me completely hating on Divergent, I did enjoy it in the 2010s.
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