The Painting (Completed)

The Painting (Completed)

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Driving through a desert to a place unknown, Chris saw a gallery. She decided to pull over and check it out. What could possible happen at a deserted place like this. Walking into the small house, she never knew that it would vanish. What happened to her? Find out. This story was originally written for a competition so just to let everyone know that the first few sentences were given to me and I didn't write them but then after that it's all me.
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"Oh I..I'm I'm..?" The words wouldnt form. I backed up slowly as he cocked his head to the side, confusion on his face. Then he did the last thing I expected, he smiled. A face splitting smile that sent shivers down my spine. This was it I was going to die. I hit some kind of nerve and sent him over the egde. I closed my eyes preparing myself for the worst. I opened them to see him coming towards me. I backed up until I hit wall behind me. He kept coming until he was inches from my face. He slammed his hands on either side of my head, blocking any exit. I kept my eyes on anything but his face. "I'm.. I didn't..please" What happens when the new guy in school is a convicted felon? Sadie is a good girl but she gets lost in his troubled past. When sex betryal and murder get thrown into the mix will they survive or will they crash and burn.

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