Critically His
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Last published Fri, Jul 12, 2024
"I can't-" I pant, my chest feels like it's closing in on itself. I can't breathe.
"Breathe, princess. I got you, nothing can hurt you. Inhale, exhale." He whispers, his hands trailing up and down my legs. I gasp, my hands clenching the armrests of the chair as I desperately try to get air into my lungs.
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Levi Everest, a tall, muscular, dude. He doesn't have a heart, according to 99% of the people he's come across. Aside from his mamá. He has a soft spot for no one, but will that change when he meets a girl?
Aurora Hartley, a thick woman, strong..enough. She doesn't like to be tested, she's not specifically dark, she just isn't friendly looking, so most people avoid her. She has soft spots for her family, animals, and babies. She's given up on finding love. What happens when she meets a certain guy?
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