Maximum Ride: The Bionic Experiment

[CF3] In this first installment of a two-parter, Max and the Flock mistakenly turn their lives upside down upon arriving at a strange island, which just happens to be the home of roughly one hundred bionic kids who are all pioneered by trained leaders: Adam, Bree, and Chase. Rather than leaving, they decide to stay, introducing themselves to not only a new world of alliances but also enemies. What could possibly come from a situation like this?

(Disclaimer: This story was written when I was but a little thirteen-year-old and has since been completed. I, Benni, have chosen not to go through and edit it for the fact that I am extremely lazy, and I also like to look back on how far my writing has come. If you truly enjoy this story, I thank you for your support, and love you so much! If you have opened it to laugh at it, however... well, I can't say I blame you. Much love!)