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A thief with a thirst for power
A gambler with a need for knowledge
A princess who can't walk away from a fight
An all-knowing coward
How can their weaknesses become their strengths in this new world?
Ace Night's life had felt like an everlasting summer-bright like the start of a sunny July day, where you could taste the sugary ice lollies that melted five seconds in the summer"s sun and smell the scent of chlorine and cologne her brothers never lost. She wasn't sure when the days began to dull and leave a bitter taste in her mouth, but her summers always returned. Her guess was Halloween, but then again it always happened before then, just a bit more frequent now. Those mornings often felt like the colour grey and dark circles under eyes, unpleasant like storm clouds but with reassurance they would pass.
. . .
You learn many things in one year, and Ace had learned this years ago. Danger lurks in mysterious places. And those places are where you least expect them.
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