silly little story Abt my OCs!!!!

(I will change the cover I promise)

a little wip story about my OCs! watch the struggles of our main character Sam in his ups and downs and his absolute worst!! he was traumatized when he was 7 years old, when he witnessed his father's murder. he's not emotionally stable but you'll see how it turns out!!!!!!! nnjcgxbV
this is my first story ever to plz give me tips I beg.

also these characters are really dear to me, I made them when I was a kid, and I finally decided to put them in a story because I actually feel confident in the story of these characters finally. so please, if you like reading about other people's cool OCs that totally super amazing then read this!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!¡¡!!!!!!!!!¡

I'm going insane please help me

-Crispysmetalbattt