OC Reviews: Book Two
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Last published Mon, May 18, 2015
Well, I've been inspired by a friend, SleepyNinjaa to do OC reviews because she's been doing some lately :3
I also figured posting a book would help get people more active!
So please, don't be shy to send us your OCs (Original Character) and we'll give it a review! Don't be afraid to post on the message board to submit a story either!
*WARNING: REVIEWS WILL POSSIBLY BE HARSH AND POSSIBLY SEEM RUDE. PLEASE KNOW WE ARE DOING THIS TO HELP YOU KNOW WHAT TO NOT DO.
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