Crowded (18+)
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  • Parts 11
  • Time 1h 27m
  • Reads 98
  • Votes 3
  • Parts 11
  • Time 1h 27m
Complete, First published Jan 06
Mature
A short story that depicts the new world's several issues through a a new reality. Crowded was created to play with phobias and concepts and flesh them out, to create a mature story about the fear's a lot of people go through. 

"Mother" Eli nodded at his mother as he sat down by the table; or what was pretending to be his mother, with white, long hair covering it's sickly pale skin, grin as wide as a clown, creasing at it's black bulging eyes. "Father" He shakily nodded at his father; a replica of the man he'd been raised by, grey strands sticking out of his bald head with something red dripping down from the strands past his black eyes to his sickening smile, so wide, with jagged, yellow teeth. "su evol ouy tnod?" He lowered his gaze to the unappetizing food in front of him. Chicken and rice. It wasn't that it was bad, or it'd gone bad, but when you ate the same thing every day for years upon years, you kind of get tired of it. He did have periods of eating solely pasta. Or Ramen. Or whatever else his mind decided it'd focus on for a month. "Thank you for the food" He lifted his fork in the air like a cheer and dug in
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Eli sold his soul to the devil to save his family and his village. He asked for fertile lands with clean water. The devil granted him that but it all went wrong when Eli went out of village borders and got tuberculosis. He died and went to hell since he done something bad to do good, so he was sent to hell for seeking help from the devil. Eli had grown and adapted to being a demon and getting used to his powers. He was then given the choice to stay in hell or live on earth with some rules. He must stretch his wings and fly everyday, he can't fall in love. And the one that broke Eli the most was that he couldn't go back to his family. But as time went on, he slowly started to adapt to the new world, from horse and carriages to cars, from phones on walls with wires to mobile phones and so on. But also he fell In love and boy did he fall hard. ~~~~~~~~~ "Hello." A chirpy voice sounded. "Can I sit here? I'm new and don't have any friends." "No." I mumbled. "Sorry about him, he's a grumpy pants." Lexi rolled her eyes. "I'm Lexi. Please take a seat." "Thank you." The boy sat down. "I'm Nikolai but everyone calls me Nick." ~~~~~~~ Mature⚠️ All rights reserved. This is a mature book with sexual scenes and talk of abused and suicide. If you don't like this type of thing please don't read it. If you do, you have had this warning to say about that type of stuff.