The suprise
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Last published Thu, Jan 18, 2024
Nancy Waverdam is a business woman. Always at work always somewhere 'important'. Her birthday is coming up and her family decides to throw a suprise party for when she comes home from work. But when she gets home something happens...? She comes home to her husband and 2 kids murderd. What and who caused this? She decides to try to solve it by herself without the police knowing. Will she find out what happened?
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