Burnt Out
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  • Membaca 75
  • Suara 1
  • Bagian 5
  • Durasi 26m
Sedang dalam proses, Awal publikasi Jan 16, 2024
Dewasa
"Emotions 𝐚π₯𝐰𝐚𝐲𝐬 have an influence over power."

"She rises, 
still trembling,
but not with fear.
With 𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐫."

"They were all born and raised in the shadows."


A first draft of a story I'm writing so I'll be posting first draft chapters as I write them just to receive feedback from other eyes as I'm figuring this 'author' shit out.
Appreciate it πŸ˜ͺ

The idea of this story has been rendered in my mind so many times that I've lost sight on whether it even makes sense anymore. 
But good news is, in the midsts of my chaos is indecision.

So dark fantasy meets dystopian and speculative fiction with absolutely badass and downright savage female main and side characters, a broody enemies to lovers romance with tropes to die for.

Betrayal, Corruption, Tense Enemies to Lovers, Complex world building, Tainted government systems, Revolutions, Science experiment given powers, Consequences of power, Found family, Dark Suspense, and so much more that I don't feel like finding words for, I swear I'm not this lazy when I'm actually writing.

If you liked these books:
Shatter Me - Tahereh Mafi
Divergent - Veronica Roth
Six Of Crows - Leigh Bardugo Renegades - Marissa Meyer
Dance Of Theives - Mary E Pearson

You're In the right place.
In no way am I comparing my first draft shit fest to these gems, just implying that these are what inspired me to write this.
As I said, this is a raw first draft so posted chapters will be edited and rewritten probably a hundred times over again but if you want to be here for the roots of a possibly mind cratering, soul shattering and heart wrenching ride, by all means, help yourself.

Playlist/Correlated music to give you a feel of the story:
Me and the Devil- Soap&Skin
Skyfall - Adele
Mad Hatter - Melanie Martinez
The Fruits - Paris Paloma
How Villains are made - Madalen Duke
Way Down We Go - Kaleo
Aimed to Kill - Jade LeMac
Castle - Halsey
War of Hearts - Ruelle
Trouble - Valerie Broussard 
Shameless - Camila Ca
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Pawns And Predators oleh crazypoodle
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A Mattheo Riddle Fanfiction Starting over at a new school 7th year was not in line with Ines life plans. She loved France, she loved her friends, she loved her life. And then one day her father got a big promotion and she watched it all crumble. She would now be uprooting her life, moving to London with her family, and attending Hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry. The only person she would know in the entire school is her childhood friend Draco Malfoy. He takes her under his wings and shows her maybe this was where she was always meant to be. She gets to know his friends, including the bane of her existence, the boy sent here with the sole purpose of getting under her skin, son of the dark lord himself...Mattheo Riddle. He was every bit of a walking red flag, and everything she knew would be completely wrong for her...but she still found it hard free her mind of him. Did Hogwarts corrupt her? or just allow her to break free from her cocoon? *TRIGGER WARNINGS* Drug and alcohol use Toxic relationship Descriptive sexual encounters Cheating Violence and torture Parental abuse This book is a little different to the ones I've done in the past it has a much more modernized feel including social media posts, pictures, and direct messages woven into the story. It's also a bit more of a slow burner but there is spice I hope you like it πŸ–€ I do not own the rights to any of the photos used in this story! they are all from Pinterest and I edited them together for story telling purposes.
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𝐌𝐲 π₯𝐨𝐯𝐞 β™‘ cover
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𝐌𝐲 π₯𝐨𝐯𝐞 β™‘

37 Bagian Lengkap

"ʏᴏᴜ'ʀᴇ α΄€ α΄…Ιͺα΄„α΄‹Κœα΄‡α΄€α΄…." "α΄€ α΄…Ιͺα΄„α΄‹Κœα΄‡α΄€α΄… α΄›Κœα΄€α΄› ʏᴏᴜ ΚŸα΄α΄ α΄‡!" I will be writing all seasons in this book. Depending on whether I finish s2 before s3 comes out I may release them altogether. (When I published this I was so scared omg Idek y) Season 1 βœ”οΈ Finished 17/05/22 Season 2 βœ”οΈ Finished around 17/07/22 Season 3 βœ”οΈ Finished 28/08/22 Editing started around the 28 or 27/08/22 finished 15/09/22 At random points I will most likely change a scene I don't like so if it's different or doesn't fit thats why. Also just a lil warning before u read, if ur reading for like full smut and all that this is not the book for u, I myself am ace and a sort of head cannon I have for Five is that he is too and he doesn't like much physical touch. (I did add some physical touch to like spice it up a bit but nothing too extreme. :) ) Most impressive rankings: #1 - fivexreader #1 - fivehargreevesxreader #1 - fivehargreeves #1 - tua #1 - female reader #2 - reader #2 - Aidangallagher #4 - the umbrella academy #2 - umbrella academy #17 - hargreeves #63 - slowburn #204 - Enemies To Lovers