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Continúa, Has publicado ene 16, 2024
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"Emotions 𝐚𝐥𝐰𝐚𝐲𝐬 have an influence over power."

"She rises, 
still trembling,
but not with fear.
With 𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐫."

"They were all born and raised in the shadows."


A first draft of a story I'm writing so I'll be posting first draft chapters as I write them just to receive feedback from other eyes as I'm figuring this 'author' shit out.
Appreciate it 😪

The idea of this story has been rendered in my mind so many times that I've lost sight on whether it even makes sense anymore. 
But good news is, in the midsts of my chaos is indecision.

So dark fantasy meets dystopian and speculative fiction with absolutely badass and downright savage female main and side characters, a broody enemies to lovers romance with tropes to die for.

Betrayal, Corruption, Tense Enemies to Lovers, Complex world building, Tainted government systems, Revolutions, Science experiment given powers, Consequences of power, Found family, Dark Suspense, and so much more that I don't feel like finding words for, I swear I'm not this lazy when I'm actually writing.

If you liked these books:
Shatter Me - Tahereh Mafi
Divergent - Veronica Roth
Six Of Crows - Leigh Bardugo Renegades - Marissa Meyer
Dance Of Theives - Mary E Pearson

You're In the right place.
In no way am I comparing my first draft shit fest to these gems, just implying that these are what inspired me to write this.
As I said, this is a raw first draft so posted chapters will be edited and rewritten probably a hundred times over again but if you want to be here for the roots of a possibly mind cratering, soul shattering and heart wrenching ride, by all means, help yourself.

Playlist/Correlated music to give you a feel of the story:
Me and the Devil- Soap&Skin
Skyfall - Adele
Mad Hatter - Melanie Martinez
The Fruits - Paris Paloma
How Villains are made - Madalen Duke
Way Down We Go - Kaleo
Aimed to Kill - Jade LeMac
Castle - Halsey
War of Hearts - Ruelle
Trouble - Valerie Broussard 
Shameless - Camila Ca
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Started:04/01/2021 ongoing -Dabi's POV- She's the kind of girl that will turn your knuckles white with rage because she doesn't know when to stop. She would kill herself if it meant the ones she loves won't leave hurt. She tastes like what I imagine the apple that Eve ate in the garden tastes like. Divine and forbidden. I despise her and everything she stands for. I want to burn everything around her just to watch her walk towards me through the ash crying. She's never seen genuine hatred. She doesn't know true betrayal. But even still, she's beautiful as a church demolition. The place once filled with enlightenment and comfort being crushed and destroyed-beautiful stained glass murals strewed on the ground now reflecting the moon. A work of sacred art now defiled and tainted with the blackness of the gravel. She's been subject to the abandonment and negligence, and now no one can hear her sing. Her screams are starting to sound like archangels. Truth baring, sorrowful and destructive. I love it when she cries; I feel the drums of war in the far horizon, and the names of long-dead obscure gods are murmured. I want nothing more than to demolish her and put her up on display. I want to see her truly broken; I want to show her what actual violence feels like. I want to set her entire world on fire. She might even howl and dance in the flames you never know with her. I won't let anyone else have the privilege of ending her. But I think I might also consume worlds for her, if she asked Tags: Endgame Tomura, happy ending, time-traveling, created an origin story for the gods, and demons, OC eventually evil and gets revenge on heroes, OC has a cat that is actually a god, villain ending, Dabi steals OC from Shoto, fluff/angst, dadzawa, Endeavor apologist, heavy smut, possessive, Yandere, drug use, extreme violence, master/pet relationships, reverse harem, villains are mean, heroes are worse, jealously, serious deep plot, poetic thoughts, emotional/mental abuse.