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Ongoing, First published Jan 16, 2024
Mature
"Emotions 𝐚π₯𝐰𝐚𝐲𝐬 have an influence over power."

"She rises, 
still trembling,
but not with fear.
With 𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐫."

"They were all born and raised in the shadows."


A first draft of a story I'm writing so I'll be posting first draft chapters as I write them just to receive feedback from other eyes as I'm figuring this 'author' shit out.
Appreciate it πŸ˜ͺ

The idea of this story has been rendered in my mind so many times that I've lost sight on whether it even makes sense anymore. 
But good news is, in the midsts of my chaos is indecision.

So dark fantasy meets dystopian and speculative fiction with absolutely badass and downright savage female main and side characters, a broody enemies to lovers romance with tropes to die for.

Betrayal, Corruption, Tense Enemies to Lovers, Complex world building, Tainted government systems, Revolutions, Science experiment given powers, Consequences of power, Found family, Dark Suspense, and so much more that I don't feel like finding words for, I swear I'm not this lazy when I'm actually writing.

If you liked these books:
Shatter Me - Tahereh Mafi
Divergent - Veronica Roth
Six Of Crows - Leigh Bardugo Renegades - Marissa Meyer
Dance Of Theives - Mary E Pearson

You're In the right place.
In no way am I comparing my first draft shit fest to these gems, just implying that these are what inspired me to write this.
As I said, this is a raw first draft so posted chapters will be edited and rewritten probably a hundred times over again but if you want to be here for the roots of a possibly mind cratering, soul shattering and heart wrenching ride, by all means, help yourself.

Playlist/Correlated music to give you a feel of the story:
Me and the Devil- Soap&Skin
Skyfall - Adele
Mad Hatter - Melanie Martinez
The Fruits - Paris Paloma
How Villains are made - Madalen Duke
Way Down We Go - Kaleo
Aimed to Kill - Jade LeMac
Castle - Halsey
War of Hearts - Ruelle
Trouble - Valerie Broussard 
Shameless - Camila Ca
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