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A Scratch. REWRITING!!
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Ongoing, First published Jan 16, 2024
Vivian, an insomniac child of Hypnos, and Sapphire, a mediocre daughter of Hecate, go on a quest to retrieve Eros's bow together. Jackson doesn't count, we hate Jackson.

Follow along as they travel and learn that not only do they trust themselves, but that they trust each other, too. 

AKA, I don't know how to write men or falling in love but I do it anyway because they are so silly and I have a Percy Jackson obsession rn

Can you tell I can barely write characters having a personality without projecting?

Most/all canon characters are ooc, so criticism on how they usually act would be appreciated!

As always, the world belongs to Rick Riordan, I just own most of the characters and the plot.

-Oliver <3
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