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Hesitant
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Ongoing, First published Mar 30, 2015
Peter fanfic!
Takes place in Divergent
Prequel to previous book destinate


Ashley was sixteen and had just chosen daughntless from erudite. She had always known daughntless was her destined faction being her older cousin Eric was leader. Now she ran  fast to get on the train it would have been easy but someone offered to help her on. He lifted her onto the moving train. I caught my breath and moved my dark blonde hair from my face to see peirceing brown eyes had clashed with my hazel. He was wearing candor blue.
"Hi,I'm Peter. What's your name?"
"Ashley"
And those few words were the ones that changed my life
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COMPLETED (EDIT: In the process of being rewritten! Some of the writing might have you cringing! New chapters will be uploaded once they're all edited and written!) Meet Olivia, she's from Amity. You may think that everyone is Amity is just the happiest people in the world, right? Well, you're wrong. Not everyone at least. When Olivia transfers to Dauntless, where her sister transferred, no one could really figure out why. But will her past from Amity follow her? Haunt her, even? What about a certain Dauntless leader that seems to like her? "Training is over for today, everyone out!" Eric roars and as I'm about to walk through the door, I hear his cold voice yet again, "Not you Via, you stay," The others flood out and I stay planted near the door, he slowly stalks towards me and I find myself walking backward until I've hit the door behind me, I slightly jump from shock and let out yet another shaky sigh, he puts both of his arms beside my head, easily towering over me. "I'm going to break you," he starts, speaking darkly as he looks directly into my eyes, "I'm not sure how, but I will, and I'm going too," "You can't break something that's already been broken by someone else," I whisper, barely audible but I know he hears it. "Who could have possibly broken you? You lived in Amity, Baby doll," he snarls, and I push him out of the way with my shoulder. I walked out of there. (As of 3/28/2019) #1 in Divergent-12.7 stories. (Best) (THIS STORY TALKS ABOUT SOME MATURE THINGS THAT MAY TRIGGER SOME PEOPLE.) I do not own Divergent, I do not own the original Divergent characters, but I do own my characters. (ABSOLUTE AMAZING COVER BY THE TALENTED @Mariana_Colon )