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Ongoing, First published Jan 26, 2024
[Offering First Two Chapters Feedback FREE] Are you a new writer or a small writer? Or maybe you've tried a new genre, and you want to improve? But where can you find help? This is the place. With 15 years of writing experience, and at least 3-4 years spent critiquing Wattpad novels, Enna has a good sense of what catches the eye of the scrollers (readers with short attention spans), and can help you improve your writing.

And most importantly, I'm Magic Fox. The face of this free service.

Come in, come in :)
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