Dying Flames
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Tris- A broken servant girl who continues to be auctioned from person to person. With no individuality or freedom, she is devoted to a life with abusive masters and a life with many stepping stones. Finally, she is to be resold at the annual auction.
Four- A quiet, antisocial master of a laseerge property, who is willing to let his servants go as they please. With no harsh commands, the girl servants of his house long for someone new, Four has them go to the auction.
Will there worlds collide? Will Tris overcome her insecurities? Can Four break down her walls?
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